Not yet spring

The sun deceives us

with winter light and no heat;

our last meeting this.

P.S. This is my first attempt (!) at writing a haiku.


15 thoughts on “Not yet spring

    1. Haha you’ve now reminded me of my first winter in the US..which was also my first experience with snow. I learnt the hard way that one must always remember to check the temperature before heading out. 😀
      Thanks for reading!


  1. Appearances…that word “deceives” is so important for setting the tone of this piece. So spare and yet so loaded.


      1. You know, I’m usually pretty easygoing when I work on my blog–unless I’m submitting to Yeah Write grids! Then I second-guess myself unmercifully. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Nate!
      Well, the snow was exciting – at first. 😀 Took me about two winters to learn how to dress in a way that didn’t make me look a walking laundry bag. And of course, I miss it now that I don’t live in the US anymore.
      My favourite season is Fall though. 🙂 It seemed like all the Windows wallpapers finally came to life.

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