Not yet spring Written by anusrini20 The sun deceives us with winter light and no heat; our last meeting this. P.S. This is my first attempt (!) at writing a haiku. Advertisements Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window)Click to email (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related 15 thoughts on “Not yet spring” Your first haiku!! Well done! I like the imagery (and also hate the winter). LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you 🙂 LikeLike Reply you’ve inspired me to try a haiku…#trotsofftofindpaperandpencil LikeLiked by 1 person Reply I hate when it looks so bright and sunny from indoors, but you step out into a frigid blast. LikeLike Reply Haha you’ve now reminded me of my first winter in the US..which was also my first experience with snow. I learnt the hard way that one must always remember to check the temperature before heading out. 😀 Thanks for reading! LikeLike Reply Appearances…that word “deceives” is so important for setting the tone of this piece. So spare and yet so loaded. LikeLike Reply Thank you Jennifer! I find that I’m always unsure about the syllable count when I write these things. I feel like I must use a syllable counter just to make myself feel better. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply You know, I’m usually pretty easygoing when I work on my blog–unless I’m submitting to Yeah Write grids! Then I second-guess myself unmercifully. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person I can’t imagine how strange snow would seem if you’d never experienced it. I love how this put me into your perspective. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you Nate! Well, the snow was exciting – at first. 😀 Took me about two winters to learn how to dress in a way that didn’t make me look a walking laundry bag. And of course, I miss it now that I don’t live in the US anymore. My favourite season is Fall though. 🙂 It seemed like all the Windows wallpapers finally came to life. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Wow, lovely! And your first! I think you’ve got a really good feel for mood. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you Christine! 🙂 LikeLike Reply Oh those kinds of days are so strange. So bitter cold, but bright and sunny. Brrrr. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Haiyaaaaaaaa! This was a lovely ditty. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply *wide grin* Thank you!! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email.